From 21163ca842b7969eade26710b4eae72ab0a99c0c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andreas Gustafsson <source@isc.org>
Date: Tue, 23 Jan 2001 23:26:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] rephrased previous change

---
 doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml  | 7 ++++---
 doc/arm/Bv9ARM.ch04.html | 5 +++--
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
index ec844d9114..dc8ce232df 100644
--- a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE book PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.0//EN"
                "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.0/docbookx.dtd">
 
-<!-- File: $Id: Bv9ARM-book.xml,v 1.90 2001/01/23 21:15:53 gson Exp $ -->
+<!-- File: $Id: Bv9ARM-book.xml,v 1.91 2001/01/23 23:26:52 gson Exp $ -->
 
 <book>
 
@@ -913,10 +913,11 @@ reload the database. </para></entry>
     manually, the following procedure will work: Shut down
     the server using <command>rndc stop</command> (sending a signal
     or using <command>rndc halt</command> is <emphasis>not</emphasis>
-    safe), wait for it to exit.  Then <emphasis>remove</emphasis> the zone's 
+    sufficient). Wait for the server to exit,
+    then <emphasis>remove</emphasis> the zone's 
     <filename>.jnl</filename> file, edit the zone file,
     and restart the server.  Removing the <filename>.jnl</filename>
-    file is necessary because the manual changes will not be
+    file is necessary because the manual edits will not be
     present in the journal, rendering it inconsistent with the
     contents of the zone file.</para>
 
diff --git a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM.ch04.html b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM.ch04.html
index a9b98fdc47..346619911f 100644
--- a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM.ch04.html
+++ b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM.ch04.html
@@ -189,7 +189,8 @@ CLASS="command"
 CLASS="emphasis"
 >not</I
 >
-    safe), wait for it to exit.  Then <I
+    sufficient). Wait for the server to exit,
+    then <I
 CLASS="emphasis"
 >remove</I
 > the zone's 
@@ -201,7 +202,7 @@ CLASS="filename"
 CLASS="filename"
 >.jnl</TT
 >
-    file is necessary because the manual changes will not be
+    file is necessary because the manual edits will not be
     present in the journal, rendering it inconsistent with the
     contents of the zone file.</P
 ></DIV