Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries

CHANGES

@@ -14,54 +14,60 @@
 			for KASP zones on restart.
 			[GL #2725]
 
-5652.	[bug]		Copy and paste error caused the socket option to
+5652.	[bug]		A copy-and-paste error in change 5584 caused the
-			be enabled instead of disabled. [GL #2746]
+			IP_DONTFRAG socket option to be enabled instead of
+			disabled. This has been fixed. [GL #2746]
 
-5651.	[func]		Refactor zone dumping to be processed asynchronously
+5651.	[func]		Refactor zone dumping to be processed asynchronously via
-			via the uv_work_t thread pool API. [GL #2732]
+			the uv_work_t thread pool API. [GL #2732]
 
-5650.	[bug]		Prevent a crash that could occur if serve-stale
+5650.	[bug]		Prevent a crash that could occur if serve-stale was
-			was enabled and a prefetch was triggered during a
+			enabled and a prefetch was triggered during a query
-			query restart. [GL #2733]
+			restart. [GL #2733]
 
-5649.	[bug]		If a query was answered with stale data on a server
+5649.	[bug]		If a query was answered with stale data on a server with
-			with DNS64 enabled, an assertion could occur if a
+			DNS64 enabled, an assertion could occur if a non-stale
-			non-stale answer arrived afterward. [GL #2731]
+			answer arrived afterward. [GL #2731]
 
-5648.	[bug]		The calculation of the estimated IXFR transaction
+5648.	[bug]		The calculation of the estimated IXFR transaction size
-			size by dns_journal_iter_init() was invalid. [GL #2685]
+			in dns_journal_iter_init() was invalid. [GL #2685]
 
-5647.	[func]		The interfacemgr has been refactored to use fewer
+5647.	[func]		The interface manager has been refactored to use fewer
-			clientmgr objects, which in turn use fewer memory
+			client manager objects, which in turn use fewer memory
-			contexts and tasks.  This should result in less
+			contexts and tasks. This should result in less
 			fragmented memory and better startup performance.
 			[GL #2433]
 
-5646.	[bug]		The default TCP timeout for rndc has been increased
+5646.	[bug]		The default TCP timeout for rndc has been increased to
-			to 60 seconds. This was its original value, but it
+			60 seconds. This was its original value, but it had been
-			had been inadvertently lowered to 10. [GL #2643]
+			inadvertently lowered to 10 when rndc was updated to use
+			the network manager. [GL #2643]
 
-5645.	[cleanup]	Remove the rarely-used dns_name_copy() function
+5645.	[cleanup]	Remove the rarely-used dns_name_copy() function and
-			and rename dns_name_copynf() to dns_name_copy().
+			rename dns_name_copynf() to dns_name_copy(). [GL !5081]
-			[GL !5081]
 
 5644.	[bug]		Fix a race condition in reading and writing key files
-			for KASP zones in multiple views. [GL #1875]
+			for zones using KASP and configured in multiple views.
+			[GL #1875]
 
 5643.	[placeholder]
 
-5642.	[bug]		Check "key-directory" conflicts in "named.conf" for
+5642.	[bug]		Zones which are configured in multiple views with
-			zones in multiple views with different "dnssec-policy".
+			different values set for "dnssec-policy" and with
-			[GL #2463].
+			identical values set for "key-directory" are now
+			detected and treated as a configuration error.
+			[GL #2463]
 
-5641.	[bug]		Address potential memory leak in dst_key_fromnamedfile.
+5641.	[bug]		Address a potential memory leak in
-			[GL #2689]
+			dst_key_fromnamedfile(). [GL #2689]
 
-5640.	[func]		Add new configuration option to set the operating system
+5640.	[func]		Add new configuration options for setting the size of
-			receive and send buffers. [GL #2313]
+			receive and send buffers in the operating system:
+			"tcp-receive-buffer", "tcp-send-buffer",
+			"udp-receive-buffer", and "udp-send-buffer". [GL #2313]
 
-5639.	[bug]		Check that the first and last SOA record of an AXFR
+5639.	[bug]		Check that the first and last SOA record of an AXFR are
-			are consistent. [GL #2528]
+			consistent. [GL #2528]
 
 	--- 9.17.13 released ---