From 961ed263840687c6cfea43f63dcb48dba207b74f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thomas Markwalder Date: Tue, 15 Apr 2014 13:37:56 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] [3395] Corrected a few grammatical miffs --- doc/guide/bind10-guide.xml | 16 +++++++--------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/guide/bind10-guide.xml b/doc/guide/bind10-guide.xml index 2add126bf3..e6900b02b1 100644 --- a/doc/guide/bind10-guide.xml +++ b/doc/guide/bind10-guide.xml @@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ Kea has been initially developed as a part of the BIND 10 framework - (). In early 2014, ISC has - made a decision to discontinue active development of BIND 10 and + (). In early 2014, ISC + made the decision to discontinue active development of BIND 10 and continue development of Kea as standalone DHCP servers. As a result, the DNS server implementation is going to be removed from the Kea source tree over time. In order to remove the dependency on Python 3, @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ Kea was developed as a collection of applications within BIND 10 framework and it still relies on the remaining parts of this framework. In particular, the servers' configuration - and startup are still facilitated by the modules which origin + and startup are still facilitated by the modules which originate in BIND 10. These modules require at least Python 3.1 to run. They also work with Python 3.2 ()). The dependency @@ -433,8 +433,7 @@ $ ./configure Some operating systems or software package vendors may - provide ready-to-use, pre-built software packages for - the Kea. + provide ready-to-use, pre-built software packages for Kea. Installing a pre-built package means you do not need to install build-only prerequisites and do not need to make the software. @@ -798,8 +797,7 @@ as a dependency earlier --> It runs the b10-init daemon which starts up the required processes, and will also restart some processes that exit unexpectedly. - bind10 is the only command needed to start - the Kea. + bind10 is the only command needed to start Kea. @@ -914,8 +912,8 @@ as a dependency earlier --> - In the future releases of Kea, the architecture which origins in - BIND 10 project will be replaced by the new mechanisms to start + In future releases of Kea, the architecture which originates in + the BIND 10 project will be replaced by the new mechanisms to start and configure Kea. The new mechanisms will use a file based configuration.