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Improve language in documentation

Various language specific improvements, from Suzanne Goldlust's
review.
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Matthijs Mekking
2020-09-21 11:03:30 +02:00
parent 0b0320360f
commit 49e76c15dd
2 changed files with 15 additions and 15 deletions

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@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@ Converting From Insecure to Secure
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A zone can be changed from insecure to secure in three ways: using a
dynamic DNS update, or via the ``auto-dnssec`` zone option, or set a
dynamic DNS update, via the ``auto-dnssec`` zone option, or by setting a
DNSSEC policy for the zone with ``dnssec-policy``.
For either method, ``named`` must be configured so that it can see
For any method, ``named`` must be configured so that it can see
the ``K*`` files which contain the public and private parts of the keys
that are used to sign the zone. These files are generated
by ``dnssec-keygen`` (or created when needed by ``named`` if
``dnssec-policy`` is used). Keys should be placed in the
by ``dnssec-keygen``, or created when needed by ``named`` if
``dnssec-policy`` is used. Keys should be placed in the
key-directory, as specified in ``named.conf``:
::
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ configuration causes all records in the zone to be signed with the
ZSK, and the DNSKEY RRset to be signed with the KSK. An NSEC
chain is generated as part of the initial signing process.
With ``dnssec-policy you specify what keys should be KSK and/or ZSK.
If you want a key to sign all records with a key you will need to
specify a CSK. For example:
With ``dnssec-policy``, it is possible to specify which keys should be
KSK and/or ZSK. To sign all records with a key, a CSK must be specified.
For example:
::
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ other updates are possible as well.
Fully Automatic Zone Signing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
To enable automatic signing, you can set a ``dnssec-policy``, or add the
To enable automatic signing, set a ``dnssec-policy`` or add the
``auto-dnssec`` option to the zone statement in ``named.conf``.
``auto-dnssec`` has two possible arguments: ``allow`` or ``maintain``.
@@ -111,10 +111,10 @@ automatically adjusts the zone's DNSKEY records on a schedule according to
the keys' timing metadata. (See :ref:`man_dnssec-keygen` and
:ref:`man_dnssec-settime` for more information.)
``dnssec-policy`` is like ``auto-dnssec maintain``, but will also automatically
create new keys when necessary. Also any configuration related to DNSSEC
signing is retrieved from the policy (ignoring existing DNSSEC ``named.conf``
options).
``dnssec-policy`` is similar to ``auto-dnssec maintain``, but
``dnssec-policy`` also automatically creates new keys when necessary. In
addition, any configuration related to DNSSEC signing is retrieved from the
policy, ignoring existing DNSSEC ``named.conf`` options.
``named`` periodically searches the key directory for keys matching
the zone; if the keys' metadata indicates that any change should be
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ conversion is complete, the NSEC chain is removed and the
NSEC3PARAM record has a zero flag field. The NSEC3 chain is
generated before the NSEC chain is destroyed.
NSEC3 is not supported yet with ``dnssec-policy``.
NSEC3 is not yet supported with ``dnssec-policy``.
Converting From NSEC3 to NSEC
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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@@ -1533,8 +1533,8 @@ default is used.
If ``full``, the server collects statistical data on all zones,
unless specifically turned off on a per-zone basis by specifying
``zone-statistics terse`` or ``zone-statistics none`` in the ``zone``
statement. These include, for example, DNSSEC signing operations
and the number of authoritative answers per query type. The
statement. The statistical data includes, for example, DNSSEC signing
operations and the number of authoritative answers per query type. The
default is ``terse``, providing minimal statistics on zones
(including name and current serial number, but not query type
counters).